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Sunday, September 30, 2007

i DID iT!!!

finally,, i just finished my third poem dedicated to my friend.. heheh.. I was compelled to post a poem for her bilang kabayaran sa aminmg deal.. i just hope she will like this piece..


UNTITLED
Standing under the pale moonlight
Feeling the touch of a hollow hand
Softly listen to the whisper of the unspoken words
Taking every eluding breath of nature

Seating in the middle of the ocean
Trying to weep the dried tears from the eyes
Looking through the reflection
Couldn't see but a melancholy of a carefree heart

Shivering in the coldness of the sun
Dancing in the silentness of the music
Screaming so softly in a loud voice
Hiding the feelings to express ones desire

Sleeping in a wide open eyes
Dreaming of nothing but something
Walking down on a thorny smooth aisle
Just to see you somewhere in nowhere

Here I am again
Gazing in a dark blue sky
Watching as stars falling into pieces
Realizing how complicated love could be.


hehehhe.. xenxa na po..

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5 Comments:

Blogger Jehzeel Laurente said...

wow nice poem u got here :P

October 1, 2007 at 8:48 AM  
Blogger moimoi said...

hehehe.. tnx.. napilitan lang ako nyan... hahahaha.. tnx anyway... :D

October 1, 2007 at 9:08 AM  
Blogger THE ANiTOKiD said...

Loved the poem kabayan! Hope you can cap the masterpiece with an appropriate title! Good luck!

October 2, 2007 at 1:08 PM  
Blogger moimoi said...

hehehe.. tnx.. i just don't know what title befits this piece.. hehehehe

October 4, 2007 at 12:55 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

beautiful attempt but needs refinement, lots of
... good luck

May 20, 2009 at 7:11 PM  

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