Sunday, September 30, 2007
i DID iT!!!
finally,, i just finished my third poem dedicated to my friend.. heheh.. I was compelled to post a poem for her bilang kabayaran sa aminmg deal.. i just hope she will like this piece..
UNTITLED
Standing under the pale moonlight
Feeling the touch of a hollow hand
Softly listen to the whisper of the unspoken words
Taking every eluding breath of nature
Seating in the middle of the ocean
Trying to weep the dried tears from the eyes
Looking through the reflection
Couldn't see but a melancholy of a carefree heart
Shivering in the coldness of the sun
Dancing in the silentness of the music
Screaming so softly in a loud voice
Hiding the feelings to express ones desire
Sleeping in a wide open eyes
Dreaming of nothing but something
Walking down on a thorny smooth aisle
Just to see you somewhere in nowhere
Here I am again
Gazing in a dark blue sky
Watching as stars falling into pieces
Realizing how complicated love could be.
hehehhe.. xenxa na po..
UNTITLED
Standing under the pale moonlight
Feeling the touch of a hollow hand
Softly listen to the whisper of the unspoken words
Taking every eluding breath of nature
Seating in the middle of the ocean
Trying to weep the dried tears from the eyes
Looking through the reflection
Couldn't see but a melancholy of a carefree heart
Shivering in the coldness of the sun
Dancing in the silentness of the music
Screaming so softly in a loud voice
Hiding the feelings to express ones desire
Sleeping in a wide open eyes
Dreaming of nothing but something
Walking down on a thorny smooth aisle
Just to see you somewhere in nowhere
Here I am again
Gazing in a dark blue sky
Watching as stars falling into pieces
Realizing how complicated love could be.
hehehhe.. xenxa na po..
Labels: UNTITLED
5 Comments:
wow nice poem u got here :P
hehehe.. tnx.. napilitan lang ako nyan... hahahaha.. tnx anyway... :D
Loved the poem kabayan! Hope you can cap the masterpiece with an appropriate title! Good luck!
hehehe.. tnx.. i just don't know what title befits this piece.. hehehehe
beautiful attempt but needs refinement, lots of
... good luck
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